Sin's Profile

[Sin]

Name: Sotoshi Ajira

Alias: Sin

Appearance: I am a half demon so therefore I do not age fast like humans. I am a few years over a hundred but I look no more than twenty. I have silver hair that barely reaches my shoulders and pointy ears like that of a bat. My eyes are light blue but turn blood red when I am angered. I am 5'9 and am quite muscular. I have a slender face and my left ear is pierced with a drake tooth. I have a beauty mark to the lower right corner of my right eye. I have sharp canine teeth and have a long scar across my chest.

Clothing: My clothes consist of a black shirt with one sleeve that is cut uneven and drapes past my left hand. The shirt has no right sleeve and is decorated with red fire designs. On my left shoulder I havea an armor plate with spikes designed in an intricket way. Replacing my right shirt sleeve is ten to twenty belts wrapped around my arm. I have a headband around my head and a fingerless glove on my left hand. I wear black pants with similar red fire designs as my shirt. The right pant leg is longer than my left making them look like half a pair of pants and half a pair of shorts sewn together. I have a belt with a bag strapped to it around my waist.

Weaponry: Kunji w/ chain and Cursed Right Hand

Advantages: Can move faster than the speed of sound and train in the art of the shadow assasin.

Disadvantages: Easily distracted and cannot control his cursed right hand.

-OWE-
Name of weapon: Dagota
Type: Kugnai w/ chain
Features: short and long range weapon; after slashing through countless enemies close to you, you can swing the Kugnai over your head by its chain and kill enemies far away from you
From: real weapon
Other: X

-Gadget War-
Name: Shuriben Stars shaped blades
Type: Ninja Star
Appearance: black, small star shaped blades
Abilities: you throw them and they stick into people

-Vehicals-
Name: my feet
Class: feet
Appearance: look and smell like feet
Armaments: kick
Features: none
Advantages: they make me run

[Draxas]

I don't think I would be so upset about this profile if it wasn't actually just InuYasha dressed in different clothes with a chain sickle.

.....

Actually, I'd still be that upset.

- No PD weaponry. This is becoming a disturbing trend.
- No background. This irks me more than anything else, especially with a character description this insane with no reasoning behind it.
- GodMode is obviously in effect here. Moves at the speed of sound? That would tear the clothes off your body, the flesh off your bones, and the sonic boom would make you burst into gibbets when you slowed down.

Requires work.

[N3B]

only godmode i see is the "faster than speed of sound". all in all, the only gripe I have with this is the no PD weaponry, which will really put you to a halt in most arenas, having only your fists...