PDBA: Evolution

[Razor]

Ah, evolution. It guides the way of life. This is kind of a single person PDBA, where you delve into your character's story. I'm starting this because the Ultimate Edition, fell off the deep end, and I want to keep advancing my character. You can do your own IF YOU WANT. I'm mainly starting this for myself tho, because I'm selfish. I will probably make my first post after I get an answer to my question. I will be including Sinim and Majora in my story (you guys probably don't know them, well, you might...). I also wish to include Phoenix and Notesurfer, but since you guys are kind of active here, I think I'll ask you first. I'll put in anyone else who wants in, but you can just start your own.

[Ranger]

sounds cool maybe I will use this to help explain what Ranger has been up to while he was gone for a little adventuring. He has a few new remods because of these adventures so i gotta update that at least.

[PhiX]

yey, me like evolution. Only prob is my plans for evolution was telling story of before Phoenix was made an Uber 1337 skedar...

[Golden Magnum]

Hmm, good idea. Perhaps you may all want to know why Platinum Dragon has a hatred for Golden Magnum and the PDBA.

Date: September 15th 2010.
Location: Phoenix Corp, Japan.

Apparantly, dataDyne and Phoenix Corp hated eachother. A recent attempt to attack dataDyne HQ then convinced Cassandra De Vries that Phoenix Corp was a threat and needed to be eliminated. Two dataDyne SuperSoldiers, Golden Magnum and Platinum Dragon were assigned to the task. Together, they will destroy Phoenix Corp.

Location: dataDyne Troop Transport, En route to the Phoenix building.

Golden Magnum: First time working together on one attack, ehh Platinum.
Platinum Dragon: It is good to be working with you, since you are rather skilled.
Golden Magnum: Yes, now do you want to go bats*** and kill Phoenix guards and exployees like no one's buisness or take a Stealthy route.
Platinum Dragon: Take the stealth route. The gaurds apparently got tougher from the last assault here,
Golden Magnum: Okay, *Takes out silenced Walther P99* lets do it.
Platinum Dragon: *Takes out his own silenced Walther P99* right behind out.

*Location: Inside Phoenix Guard Transport*

Guard: *Steps out* la la la, I'm gonna do some guarding, guarding, guarding, I'm gonna do some guarding, all night long.
Platinum Dragon: *Sneaks out of the back* not for long you ain't *shoots guard in the head. Another guard in the lot notices.
Guard 2: Raise the alurm (Note: that is not a typo. That sounds like what he is saying) *Gets shot in the head by Golden Magnum*!
Platinum Dragon: Good shot, Magnum.
Golden Magnum: Let's go.

Golden Magnum and Platinum Dragon proceeded to sneak through the facility, shooting guards when needed and avoiding others. However at one point when they were in the cafeteria after shooting a guarding heading for the "Alurm" in there.

Golden Magnum: This is too easy.
Platinum Dragon: Half of everything is luck, Magnum.
Golden Magnum: And the other half?
Platinum Dragon: *"Alurm" goes off* fate!

At that moment, many Phoenix Black Ops Troopers and other soldiers stormed the building. Two approach Magnum and Platinum. However, Platinum shot them both with his silenced Walther P99 in the head. After, he grabbed their SG5s and threw one over to Golden Magnum.

Platinum Dragon: We've got a hell of the mess here. We'll use these to stop Phoenix Troops.

Many Black Ops now were entering the Cafeteria. Golden Magnum and Platinum Dragon. Some of them had AIMS 20s which eventually replaced Magnum and Platinum's SG5s. After holding off Black Ops and not being able to exit the Cafeteria, they needed backup.

Golden Magnum: *radio* base, this is Magnum. We need an assault team here immediately! Magnum out!

The assault team didn't take too long because Seattle and Japan were not far from each other. Just when Golden and Platinum were running out of ammo, an alarm went off in the lobby and dataDyne Shock Troops came in to blast the Phoenix Troops. Ths raised Magnum and Platinum's morale and allowed them to work there way out of the cafeteria. Some Shock Troops broke from the lobby to join the two Hedgechaos. the extra support. Golden Magnum, Platinum Dragon and two Shock Troops worked their way up the fire escape, shooting Phoenix Troops. It was not easy. Both Shock Troops with him got killed and Golden Magnum took one to the arm while Platinum Dragon got shot in the leg. Still, they made it to the Executive floor. Their next task was getting into Mayhew's former office which now belong to the current CEO, Mr. Antonio Drake, cousin of the late Raphael Drake. Phoenix Troops around every corner made their trek to the office a living hell. When they got there, they were sure to barricade off the door. When they got in, they pointed their AIMS 20 at Drake.

Golden Magnum: Time's up, @$$hole!
Antonio Drake: Well, well, well, if it isn't you two dataDyne freaks. Sorry, but I can't keep my helicopter waiting!
Platinum Dragon: Maybe if we shoot you, the pilot will learn patience.
Antonio Drake: *Looks at watch.* Look at the time. Can't hang around. So long, s***bags! *Produces a jet pack and flies out under gunfire* MWA HA HA HA HA!
Golden Magnum: S***! He's heading for the helipad.
Platinum Dragon: We'll use the stairwell to follow him! Lets go!

The two immediately busted the door open and ran towards the general direction of the stairwell, up it and then to the helipad.
There, an armored gunship was waiting.

Antonio Drake: Dammit, those two never take a hit. Fine, they want to mess with Phoenix, they face the consequences! MWA HA!

The gunship rose and immediately sprayed gunfire at Golden Magnum and Platinum Dragon. Combined with the Phoenix Troops heading to the helipad, it seemed hopeless. Until Golden Magnum spotted an AT-420 Sentinel on the opposite side of the helipad.

Golden Magnum: *Thinking to self* The great thing about an anti-vehicle weapon: You can always find them when you need them. *To Platinum* Listen, I need to take out that copter. Hold off the Phoenix Troops while I use that Sentinel to take out that copter.

Immediately, Golden Magnum sprinted towards the Sentinel while Platinum Dragon shot the Phoenix Troops with his AIMS 20. Upon picking out the Sentinel, he aimed it and fired a presice shot into the chopper. However, it wasn't taken out. But another rocket brought the chopper down.

Antonio Drake: Noooo! I have failed. Phoenix is long gone. *Falling* ARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!! *Dies*

The death of their CEO seriously brought the morale of the Phoenix Troops down to zero. Instead of firing, they surrender. This gave the Shock Troops, Golden Magnum and Platinum Dragon time to destroy all of the Phoenix files. Soon, Phoenix Corp. was reduced to nothing. After, they all flew back to Lucerne Tower, Seattle.

*Location: Cassandra De Vries' Office, Lucerne Tower*

Cassandra De Vries: Perfect, we have finally taken down Phoenix Corp. Thanks to both of you. *Hands them both a medal* Now Golden Magnum, for you excellent work, I have a few things for you.
Platinum Dragon: Umm, what about me.
Cassandra De Vries: Uhh, nothing for you, you are dismissed.
Platinum Dragon: *Snaps* SO, I RISK MY ASS TO DESTROY SOME CHEAPASS CORPORATION AND I DON'T GET S***. AND YET YOU TREAT GOLDEN MAGNUM LIKE YOUR LITTLE PET. I'M YOUR BEST SUPERSOLDIER, FOR GOD'S SAKE. IF YOU DON'T NEED ME, I'M OUT OF HERE. BUT I WILL GET REVENGE, YOU'LL SEE!!!

After, Platinum Dragon stormed out of Lucerne Tower with nothing but his Kevlar jumpsuit and a silenced Walther P99.

(Notes: After, Golden Magnum obtains his left-handed DY-357 LX and the nightEagle. However, I don't feel like typing that all out. More later.)

[NeoPhife]

Cool! Evolution's back. I'll type mine on Word then post it later.

[Razor]

Fine...don't reply...I'll put you in whether you want it or not!


Wind and rain poured through the gap as the door to the Pond Punk slid open. The dark, cloaked figure of Razor stepped out of the storm. He lowered his hood and entered the bar. He slumped onto a bar stool and shook the water out of his hair.

"Hey Razor...haven't seen your face around here in a while!" called Alec from behind the bar. His always cheerful face popped up. "It's really hot in here...why don't you take off that cloak? I know you have it weighted too, that can't be comfortable..."

"I'd rather not..."

"Why's that?"

"See for yourself," Razor muttered as he slid away a side of the cloak, revealing the upper part of a wing to the shocked bartender. "As you can see, I've been changing, and I'd rather not draw attention to myself."

"I see...you want the usual?"

"Yeah, double shot please."

Alec ducked under the bar, grabbing a bottle of vodka and poured it into a medium sized glass until it was about 1/3 full. He then procured some skim milk and filled the glass some more. Then he grabbed the final ingredient: chocolate syrup. He squeezed some in, trying not to vomit as he mixed the hard chocolate milk. "Don't know how you drink this stuff Raz...ugh," he said as he slid it to the waiting mercenary.

"Don't dis it 'til you've tried it, it's really good," he said as he took a sip. "I've got some help coming...I'm sure you don't mind, do you?"

"Just as long as you don't let any of them Skedar folk start drinking."

"Don't worry, I remember what happened last time, hahaha." A smile passed Razor's face, then disappeared just as quickly.

"Was that a smile? And you're not killing someone?"

"You can shut up and forget about it right now, or I will have something to smile about..." Razor said as he gripped the hilt of his sword, the Chaoverge.

"Whoa, whoa, it's okay...calm down..."

"Haha...you know I would never hurt you, not after what you did for me..."

[PhiX]

Hmm... I will post soon, and I have decided it will take place in the "Uber 1337" character stage of PhoeniX.

Preview for: PhoeniX' Evolution
Long times of useless battle, long days without sleep, many times of death and ressurection are behind PhoeniX now. He is free from the PDBA for now, and he has business to do. Taking the first ferry he can back to the Skedar homeworld, Phoenix plans to rebel and attack the current head government on the planet. It was that same government that attempted to use him, imprison him, and turn him into a slave as part of the Super Soldier program.

[NeoPhife]

The sands of the Death Valley desert land scrape against the hard concrete of the DevianTech Weapons Testing Complex. Constant weather conditions keep the guards and personel busy at keeping themselves cool. Surrounding the central control tower overseeing operations is the circular main complex, camoflauged in the amber sand. As a truck passes through a checkpoint near the outer edge of the complex, a private helicoptor zooms in the distance, also heading towards the complex from the northeast. The date is the third of August, nineteen-ninety.

The small airborne vehicle approaches closer, apporiximately ten miles from the complex. Inside the craft, a radio message folows through.

Radio: This is Air Control Central to Unidentified Aircraft. You are in restricted airspace...

Pilot: This is dataDyne representative Timothy Marx. I am here for business with your chairman Devin Morgan regarding a possible transaction. I request permission to land. Over.

Air Control: ...permission to land granted at helipad S-D. Over and out.

The radio sliences as the helicoptor increases forward speed. Several minutes later, Marx walks into the main lobby of the complex, awaiting the arrival of Morgan and the plans regarding Project SEAL.

(Sorry for making this short. I am being annoyed to death by my sister and her friend, so I'll post more later.)

[PhiX]

OOC: This is half of my Prologue, other half might have to wait till 2 days.

Prologue-Escape from his captors Part 1

Skedar year 2591-
Planet Boriusk, Ownership: Skedar

Kra’tav Karacheev, better known as Phoenix, awoke from his slumber in a cryogenics tube. This was the beginning of an average weapons training day, which occurred 3 times every Skedar week for Phoenix. Skedar had been put through heavy training for 3 Skedar months now. 3 months ago, he had been chosen for a so called Super Soldier program. He had been given implants, genetic enhancements, and all the latest Skedar technology available, including the new K7b “Hunter” plasma assault rifle. Since then, he had been put through rigorous government-supported training programs, training nearly every day. Only recently had Phoenix overheard an argument about Phoenix’s freedom. As he heard it, the issue was that he had none. The Skedar government project funding this program had basically stripped Phoenix of any rights just for volunteering to serve the state at the highest level. Phoenix thought this would change soon however. It would change soon. Very soon. Phoenix would change it this very day.

Phoenix’s vision cleared from its blurriness and he saw 2 lumbering Soldiers in front of him, grabbing Phoenix’s arms and pulling him out the opened tube. They escorted him out of the building, and took a seat with him in an APC which would carry them to the firing range Phoenix would practice at in the morning. Phoenix had planned exactly what would happen, and if he failed, he wanted to die with honour, not to be trapped in the mess he was in all over again.

Somewhere during the ride, he noticed the two Skedar soldiers talking to each other and not watching Phoenix like they should be. Phoenix looked at the doors of the APC. They were not closed by anything too heavy. Phoenix grinned, then slowly turned towards the soldier sitting to his right. With a sudden and swift motion, Phoenix grabbed the creature with both of his arms, which were genetically enhanced to be longer than most Skedar arms, and then with his strong torso muscles he slammed the man into the door. He did this three times before slamming very heavily, forcing one of the doors off of its hinges. The door collided with the dirt road the APC was on, and the soldier followed. Phoenix turned around and could not stop getting shoulder rammed by the other soldier. Phoenix backed off against a wall then kicked the soldier against the other wall, and with a single fluidic motion he swung to the wall the soldier was pinned to and then shoved him out the door.

“What is going on back there!” the driver yelled. At this point Phoenix was slipping on the black armoured vest and pants given to him as an Elite Soldier uniform. He also slipped on a high-tech wristband, fitted with many gadgets and a retractable bayonet.

“Nothing!” Phoenix yelled back, trying to buy some time. He did not need any more. Phoenix retracted the sharp bayonet and cut open the light fencing between the driver’s seat and the cargo area. The driver, even though in a Skedar biosuit, which soldiers wore to make their small snake like body nearly the size of an average human, was frightened and began to scream. Phoenix cut his tail open, which was placed on the back of the head. The Skedar shut up and went limp. Phoenix opened the door, and shoved the dead Skedar out, then closed the door and took the controls of the APC.

[PhiX]

OOC: Okay Razor, I guess I will let you include me. Our evolutions will have to take place at different periods... so I see it as...

[my]
Prologue:Before your stuff....
Main Evolution piece: After your stuff..

[Snake]

Date: 19th of June
Time: 10:15pm
Location: Snakelord Inc HQ deep under Pacific ocean

"And in other news, Nick Holbrook aka Snakelord has been identified as a target by the rouge terrorist group 'La Trelida'. Snakelord has upgraded the security at the Ultra-secure facility belonging to Snakelord Inc"

Snake swiched of the huge TV screen in his luxurious office on floor B20 and turned to his personal assistant: Jackson Raladin, and spoke,
"Jack, I upgraded the security because of the experiments the labs will undertake upon the DataDyne Sheild Technology, not because of La Trelida as many people think."
"Sir, I'm sure many people think you had good reason to" replied Jack "These experiments will clear the fog around the DataDyne Corperation"
"Very well, please see if you can arrange a meeting with my old allies: N3B and Notesurfer and request that they meet me here as soon as they can, tell them to wait in the foyer" Snake said
"Very well"

End Transmission

[PhiX]

OOC: This is not the full second half of the Prologue, a part 3 should be posted tomorrow.
Also, you will notice that my posts are about exactly 1 A4 page(average letter size page) each, as I'm too lazy to type more than that in one day.

Prologue Part 2[/u]


Dust rolled in a steady stream behind the Armoured Personnel Carrier that Phoenix now drove along a dirt-road. Like most Skedar planets, Boriusk was filled with deserts, and most large cities were built in these deserts, as high temperatures were more comfortable for Skedar. One such city was the Boriutus, the capital terrestrial star port of the planet. It was this place that shuttled people onto the large cargo and assault ships that transferred people planet to planet, and star to star. This was also the city Phoenix was heading to.

Phoenix’s APC traveled over a hill, and the mighty port of Boriutus came into view. The city was the colour of the sand it rested on, having buildings that sand clung to and never let go. The buildings were also not tall, only being 5 to 8 stories at the tallest, with the exception of numerous air control towers and large administrative buildings.

The city seemed to grow bigger and bigger until it swallowed Phoenix’ APC as he entered it. He sped right through one of the city’s main streets, heading for the heart of the city, to the spaceport.

It took a long time to get there, but he arrived at long last, and began to drive slower, looking for an open transport station. It did not take long to find one, as there were plenty of them. Phoenix found a building, with a sign on top that roughly translated to “Get home quick.” Phoenix smiled and pulled over his vehicle and parked next to the building, ignoring parking regulations. He walked right in through the building’s small double doors and walked over to a reception counter, run by a civilian, who was no taller than one and a half feet.

“How may we help you?” the clerk asked.

“I want a flight off this planet as soon as possible,” Phoenix growled.

“Destination pleassse.”

“Anywhere, just get me on the nearest jumpship you can.” The clerk seemed a little puzzled, and Phoenix merely growled, “No questions, just get me on the nearest travel as fast as possible.”

“Okay, let me go check what we have.”

Phoenix leaned against the counter, and after 2 long minutes, the little clerk came scurrying back with a paper that seemed large for it, but it was obviously sized for the common Biosuit equipped warriors of the Skedar. It then rolled a pen to Phoenix and said, “Sign here. Your flight will cost 1750 units.”

Phoenix smiled and signed the sheet, and then pulled out the wallet of the old driver of the APC, which he conveniently found in the passenger seat. He opened it and was able to fetch out the money he needed and handed it to the clerk. “Okay, you can be on your way, head through the door right of here. Your shuttle will be leaving in 15 minutes, it will take an hour to reach your jumpship, and then your vessel will be heading to [The Skedar Homeworld] shortly.

Phoenix did as the clerk said, and was able to skip the administration area, as the feeble Skedar government gave soldiers permission to not have to show IDs for transports. Phoenix boarded the Shuttle, which was waiting out in the open, and waited for lift off.

[Snake]

Date: 20th of June
Location: Snakelord Inc HQ, under Pacific Ocean
Time: 1:42am

Nick had indeed been up all night with his generals, planning the attack on the La Trelita base and he was getting ready for a long sleep, He unstrapped his weapons and sat on his sleep couch and fell into a deep sleep.

[Notesurfer]

Razor turned as someone walked into the bar. He was tall, even for a human, and wore a cloak to his feet. Sinewy and lithe, Razor thought he looked just like something from a movie he once saw.
“Sheesh, you'd think he was the emperor from star wars just looking at him” Razor thought to himself. “Of course, I have things to hide as well” as he looked at the slight lump on his shoulders that made him look rather strange. Walking to the counter, the man signaled Alec with a motion. Alec made no movement. In a deep voice, the man snarled.
“Alec, I have no time for this. Your petty games do not impress me.”
“Oh yea!” Alec shot back. “You could at least pay your tab!”
“You know very well I paid my tab last time, now cut the chatter and give me a milk, chocolate. NO alcohol, you know what happened when you tried to slip me some last time.”
“Why don't you want alcohol?” asked Razor, curious. The man turned to face him.
“Don't you recognize me Razor? Oh wait, I'm still in disguise aren't I?” the voice coming from the hood no longer sounded deep and commanding. As a matter of fact it sounded almost childish, sort of like . . .
“Notesurfer!” said Razor joyfully. “I knew you wouldn't let me down.” Razor knew it was him for sure once he started shrinking, and absorbed his robe. Even though he had seen it many times, it was still a strange thing to watch. First, his height was going down slowly. As he did this, his robe seemed to be sucked into his black jumpsuit underneath. Once he got down to his normal height, and the last of the robe was sucked in, came the strangest part. Notesurfer's jumpsuit would shimmer and ripple like it was some kind of living puddle, and then it would form into colors and shapes making up into Notesurfer's usual clothing, a T-shirt and Jeans.
“You know I don't drink” said Notesurfer playfully.
“Heh, so, how'd you know I needed you?” asked Razor.
“From your first post, er, I mean your *ahem* supersecret message.”
“Ha ha, nice one. You gotta watch that. Just because we have superpowers making us godlike, doesn't mean you should brag about it” Razor laughed.
“Hey, are you laughing and not killing someone?” Notesurfer said looking at Razor with a strange emotion in his eyes. Immediately Razor became stonefaced.
“Listen, Razor, you don't have to be so tight. Being happy and loose instead of rock hard and stony is a good thing. You may think it means weakness, but it doesn't. I'm not exactly a puny dweeb when it comes to strength in fighting am I?” Razor shook his head, still kicking himself mentally for messing up.
“Yet I laugh and kid around and have fun, even when I'm not fighting. You may not realize it now, but someday you will, and you'll wish you had let yourself go sooner.”
An awkward silence passed between the two. “See what's happening, your causing a rift in a newfound friendship, and it's all because you're too selfish to realize what effect it has on the ones who mean the most to you.” Suddenly Razor blurted out.
“I'm sorry, I never looked at it that way. I thought that I was protecting myself from becoming emotionally attached. I see what you mean now. No hard feelings?”
“No hard feelings, after all, I was once just like you.” replied Notesurfer. Once again, Razor looked into those stormy blue eyes and got the feeling that Notesurfer was a lot older than he looked. He shook his head to clear himself.
“So, what did you need me for?” asked Notesurfer.

[Razor]

"Well, " Razor said as he started removing objects from his belt, "you remember the Crystal of Darkness, right? It's what gave me these wings."

"Yeah, I remember all that...so you've got a lead on another one and want me to help? Is that it?"

"Yes, I know you are someone that I can trust," Razor said, distracted once more by the child's stormy eyes, "and you have great powers...hold the Crystal for a moment to prove my theory." With that Razor picked up the small black crystal from the bar. To Notesurfer, it appeared to be a plain black stone, but to Razor, it eminated a blood red light. He placed the crystal in Notesurfer's soft hand. Notesurfer gasped as the crystal began to glow, just as Razor saw it intensify. "Just as I thought...we share some kind of common bond, though I'm not sure what, that will allow us to utilize the power of these stones properly. I'm not sure what will trigger it, however."

"I see...well, where is the next one?"

"Remember this?" Razor asked as he picked up a small disc, taking a gulp from his glass as he did. "I showed it to you before, I picked it up from the warrior bot. It shows the locations of the majority of Platinum Dragon's bases."

"So? Does he have it?"

"He does, but he doesn't know it. This disc here..." he said as he picked up another disc and placed it in his Uplink, "...contains the blueprints for the Mecha suit he stole from the old man Carrington. See this here?" Razor zoomed in on the reactor core of the suit on it's back. "This is it's main reactor."

"So the next stone is in there?"

"No...the next stone, which i've identified as the Gem of Light, is contained in the auxilliary reactor, which only activates when the main reactor is destroyed. The auxilliary reactor is right underneath the main reactor, but is shielded by power drawn from the main reactor. We need to destroy the main reactor to be able to cut into the auxilliary reactor and take the Gem."

"Wow...so where does he have the suit?" Notesurfer said, quietly sipping his chocolate milk.

"Here, in Eurelco's testing ground near the small town of Hann-Muenden, Germany. It's a small town, so they don't get much publicity, which suits them just fine. It's high security, and Platinum Dragon will likely be testing the suit personally."

"I have one question...are you insane? Not only do we have to make our way through a high security Eurelco facility full of their newest technology, but we also may have to fight Platinum Dragon...IN THAT SUIT!?!?!"

"Keep it down...and don't worry...we have help coming."

"How about an army?"

"Better...Phoenix will be meeting up with us."

"And?"

"He'll be arriving from the planet Skedar along with my brother, Sinim, the second in the Skedar/dataDyne supersoldier project, and Majora, the successor to the throne. The five of us...will be unstoppable..."

"Anything else?"

"I've been getting the wierdest feeling lately. It's like what I feel when my brother is near, but more subtle, and...different. There is something powerful following us...keep your eyes open."

"Well, should we head off?"

"Yeah," Razor said as he placed the various items in his belt and topped off his drink, "we'd best get going...here's for security Alec." Razor left a 20 dollar bill on the counter and Notesurfer finished off his milk, chugging the last half of the glass.

"Hey kid, aren't you gonna pay?" inquired Alec to Notesurfer.

"Put it on my tab..." said the child-looking person as he walked out the door.

Alec sighed as he took the 20 from the counter. He watched to two leave and sat back. "I hate my job..."

A figure watched as Razor and Notesurfer left the bar and walked through the rain. He laughed to himself, his tall and lanky form shaking as he did. He hopped from the top of the building into a dark alley. "So then hunt begins again, chosen one?"