Golden Magnum
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Post by Golden Magnum on Jul 12, 2003 10:47:18 GMT -5
Note to Razor and N3Burgener: I will be going up to a Camp on Sunday and I won't be back until about Saturday. Please do not start the CISOD until I get back, please!
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Post by Razor on Jul 12, 2003 11:16:54 GMT -5
ooc: yeah, this is going to have to happen AFTER Notesurfer's scene, but he has to post it! It's VERY IMPORTANT!
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Post by N3B on Jul 12, 2003 14:33:07 GMT -5
Saturday..... the 19th? i think we can arrange that.
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Post by N3B on Jul 12, 2003 15:23:50 GMT -5
How about, we start it on wednesday or Tuesday, and then let people show up. We can have the GameFAQs invite so new people can show up, and then we'll start once you make your post GM. how's that sound?
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Golden Magnum
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Post by Golden Magnum on Jul 12, 2003 16:33:58 GMT -5
Hmm, sounds good. Once I get back, I'll post as soon as possible.
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Post by Notesurfer on Jul 12, 2003 16:49:08 GMT -5
Wow, you guys have really needed me. You handled my situation pretty well though, thanks. The only part I didn't like was the corny little "Schzar we have to help him!!!" I started cracking up when I saw that. I have an idea how to fix the clone problem though . . . If no one already has a plan. My next post will be how the three of us (I believe it's pheonix, sinim, and myself) deal with the "Clone Army."
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Golden Magnum
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Post by Golden Magnum on Jul 12, 2003 16:53:56 GMT -5
WHAT? You are going to leave the rest of us out. But we want to kill King Platinum Dragon Clones as well.
Ohh well. We are all in the same room facing an army of clones, so don't you think we'd all fight.
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Post by Notesurfer on Jul 12, 2003 18:28:36 GMT -5
Whoops, so far the people here are: Golden Magnum, Razor(injured), Majora, Sinim, Phoenix, and me. *Cue random action music here* The warriors looked across the massive hangar like area as clones poured from the doors. "Sinim, see if you can get your staff to transform some of these guys back to their natural selves. they're helpless innocents, if we kill them it's no better than murder!" Sinim silently adjusted his emotions, changing from hate to pity, rage to compassion. "The rest of you try to hold them off without actually killing them." The group readied themselves, set their weapons to stun and held their hands strait out in a slapping position. "Remember, the ones in the front will be weaker than the ones in the back." "How can you be so sure?!?!?!?!" shouted Pheonix. The noise of a thousand feet was deafening. "I'll explain later, right now we need to get out of here. I don't want to slaughter these poor villagers." With that Notesurfer took a mighty leap, and clung to the roof as he sucked his robe in, turning into his battle suit. He pulled out a small black oblong object and turned it on. He started cutting a relatively small, round hole in the roof. The team readied themselves as the sides clashed. Clones were flying everywere, but no blood was being spilled. The absence of a true leader caused the group to listen to Notesurfer. Golden Magnum screamed with rage and frustration, and only the knowledge that Notesurfer was right kept him from massacring them right then and now. Seeing his enemy everywere was driving him insane, and he hoped that Notesurfer knew what he was doing. Majora's huge rockets were landing in the middle of the crowd, knocking every clone within 12 feet unconcious (they were set that way after the order that no blood be spilled). Unfortunatly, it was taking way too long to reload, the rockets being designed for singular destruction, not for fighting an army. Sinim was by far haveing the easiest time keeping from killing them. Using his staff he was changing every clone he touched back into their origional forms. However, the other clones would then immediatly re-clone themselves, making it a no win situation. Notesurfer leaped down from the ceiling, a rope ladder extending from his back. He crouched down, yelling "Lets get going, hurry." One by one the members of the team backed up and climbed up the ladder. Sinim and Majora carried Razor to safety. Razor was the last one out, and he regained conciousness as he felt the icy blast of a night in germany's mountains. He looked down into the room (being the only one close enough to the hole that Notesurfer cut to see through), at Notesurfer crawling up the ladder, taking a real beating from the clones down there. Razor started to scream. "Notesurfer! Notesurfer get out of there! Hurry!" Suddenly he tripped, and fell downwards, into the crowd of clones. The last thing Razor saw of him before he pulled down the rope and sealed the hole, was him screaming and writhing on the ground as the clones stuck their collective claws into his sides and back and head and every part of his body. His symbiote was helping him, but it wasn't enough alone. His writhing, screaming, pain filled body was the last view that Razor saw. And then the hole filled. For hours afterwards, Razor stumbled, being held up by Sinim and Majora. He was almost delirious, and he found out later that he screamed and resisted, saying that they had to go back for Notesurfer. In his semi conciousness, Razor thought about his conversation with Notesurfer back at the bar. "He had been trying to tell me something important, and I blew him off. Now I see what he meant." Notesurfer. The very name was painful during that long trek to safety. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * I hope that you guys don't care if I get too emotional, since this IS supposed to be Evolution, and Razor and I have some ideas, I even have some ideas that I haven't told him yet. On a side note, what does OOC: stand for?
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Majora1988
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Post by Majora1988 on Jul 13, 2003 2:48:07 GMT -5
Majora had been out of whack for a long time, about 6 months now. He had grown fat in the palace of the Skedar. now harnesing his skills, or training. But finally one day Majora decided to wake up and rejoin the PDBA.
Majora picked up his double maulars, his slayer, and his reaper, and prepared to return to the PBDA. On his way to the ship, Majora ran into a old "friend."
It was his old advisor. He challanged Majora for the throne, and Majora thought, "Ahhh, person whom I can train against."
Majora whipped out his Mauler and jumped, firing the whole time. A few shots hit and Majora finished his move with a slash with his claws. rippin gthe suit open and revealing the tiny snake like creature.
Majora said, "Goodbye my 'friend'" Before empting his clip into the Advisor.
Majora said, "That was a good warm-up Time to rejoin the PDBA."
Majora reentered his ship and flew back tward Earth.
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Post by Notesurfer on Jul 13, 2003 12:42:13 GMT -5
The team was very paranoid. After hiking for 4 hours to get to a relatively safe building they discovered enemy activity nearby. While they were still mourning their loss, it was time to move on. All of a sudden, the door swung open and Phoenix stumbled through, a cold blast of air blowing in light snow drifts until he slammed the door behind him.
"Yep, their searching everywhere for us, it won't take long. They've been shooting at anything that moves, but they didn't see me" reported Phoenix as he sat down and warmed his hands by the fire.
"Razor is still in bad condition" Sinim replied. "I tried healing him with my staff, but I'm really drained."
"If we don't get a move on then my hated enemy Platinum Dragon will get away from us and we will fail. We must destroy the enemy!" Golden Magnum stood up from his chair in the darkest corner of the room, where he had been sitting for the past hour.
"NO!" shouted Majora, standing up as well. "If we attempt to destroy this army, then we will be destroyed as well, or even worse, turned into clones." The two former teammates looked at each other with hate and started circling each other.
"Guys, guys, control yourselves" Pheonix tried to reason with them. "We must stick together so that we can escape. Notesurfer isn't dead, and he can disguise himself. Once he gets here we can form a plan of action." The two sat down once again, although still moody and grumpy.
"No, we must go on as soon as possible" Razor said quietly. Everyone looked at him with surprize. He was sitting upright in the corner by the fireplace sipping some survival brew. "I was looking down the escape hatch longer than any of you, I saw what happened.
"He's still alive, I heard screams coming from down there, he was probably kicking major butt" Golden Magnum said. "Not as good as me of course, but he'll escape and we'll get out of here."
"He is alive, but not in the way you think" said Razor, his voice dying down to a whisper. "They knocked him off the ladder, and then they stuck their claws into him. He's one of them now.” There was a shameful silence as each one thought of Notesurfer, and how he was out there, right now, hunting them down. HUNTING them. They'd all seen him track, and with his Symbiote, everyone knew he would be the first to find them. And they would be forced to kill him. If he didn't take a few of them down first. Their thoughts were interrupted by the door flying open and a clone walking into the building and slamming the door shut behind him. At least, it looked like a clone, you couldn't exactly be sure.
"Wait, don't shoot" it said. Golden Magnum had had enough. Pulling out two Dragons, he shot them on proxy towards the clone.
"Well, that took care of that." However, his eyes widened when the smoke cleared and he saw the clone slumped against the opposite wall coughing. "Notesurfer?" asked GM. "How is it possible? Razor said you were dead." But sure enough, the clone shimmered, and Notesurfer shrank back to his form. Bloody and beaten, he passed out.
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Post by Notesurfer on Jul 13, 2003 12:43:42 GMT -5
I have one more scene to do before you guys can continue, please be patient. I don't care if you do something else just don't do anything with the characters in the building. Thx
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Post by Razor on Jul 13, 2003 19:17:01 GMT -5
OOC (Out of character):nice job...well done. You are a really good writer...
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Post by Notesurfer on Jul 14, 2003 4:58:17 GMT -5
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Post by Razor on Jul 15, 2003 19:03:13 GMT -5
OOC: Notesurfer, hurry up and finish this up...I've got to post the CISOD tomorrow, and it takes place after this!
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StormX
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Post by StormX on Jul 16, 2003 12:21:01 GMT -5
Hey, I'm new here I saw something about this on GameFAQs. I posted my profile in Profiles II topic here, and was wondering if I could do some stuff in here for some story for me before i get into the good stuff
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